Help critique my songs!

Invocation · Guest

Hey check out my site at http://invocation.servemp3.com

I've got a bunch of mp3s and lyrics up for my new album, and I really need input. I'd appreciate it if you would give me opinions on the board that is on the site there, but I will come back here to read your opinions from time to time as well. I'll be glad to look at anyone else's stuff and offer some input as well, just let me know

Jeff

PunkStar · Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2003 1:09 am Post subject:

I had a scan through some of the lyrics. I don't really think you need the input. The songs I read were pretty good. I can't think of a way to improve them. How do you write that stuff?

And more importantly, how did you post as a guest? I thought you had to be a member.

Invocation · Guest

I dunno, I went to post a new thread and when it asked for my username I just used the Username I use on all my songwriting boards and it didn't ask for a password so I guess you don't have to be a member Smile

I actually don't write the lyrics, except I helped on a few (most recently Jesus Wept, which I'm EXTREMELY proud of) I do more of the music. The 2 girls write most of the lyrics.

Well, if you do find anythign better you want to change, let me know, Id love some input, even if it seems to be ticky stuff

PunkStar · Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2003 12:20 am Post subject:

Well, that's weird. I can do that to (without being logged it). That's not right. I dunno, maybe it's an option or something. I'll have to check that on my version of the board. But you can't do that on the other sectioned, you actually have to be logged in on the others to post (and some you have to be logged in to even see).

If I find anything to change I'll be sure to let you know. I'll either post it here or on your own message board.