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Kane17
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 25, 2003 9:05 pm    Post subject: Some songs... Reply with quote

I just thought I'd do this.. some are incomplete but you get the general Idea...I'd like to go more in depth with some of them but...anyways, if someone has any doctrinal conflicts with my songs please LET ME KNOW PLEASE!!!


Integrity:
(This is a song I wrote as a born again beleiver, to myself before I was a TRUE Christian)
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Verse1
So you don't think you're one of them,
You say You're not like the rest
But you, bare no inocence
You still dwell within the nest

Chorus:
If I would follow Massed Society
Could I be set free??
But we can follow Jesus the Savior
So show some integrity!

Verse2
Do you even feel guilty
for things youve done in reality?
It's not to late to be made clean
Repent, show Responsibility!
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Now there's not many words but it's complete and I think it hits the point.



After making mistake after mistake with my girlfriend I wrote this song, It's not complete but It's coming along. It's written as a prayer with soft guitar arpeggiating and then a slow power rock riff at the chorus. I've maybe temporarily named this...

"Repentence Song"
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It's been a while since I talked to you last
I'm so ashamed of my accumulating mess.

Verse1
How could I be so unfaithfull to you
I said I gave my life but my sin is born anew
My heart is filled with shame and my guilt is running wild.
I've disgraced your Holy Name, I've disgraced your precious Child.

Chorus
And Even though, my God is strong
I fall on my face, when I walk alone
And Even though, I did what I hate
Please God restore me, as I repent!

Bridge
God Restore me!
God Restore me!
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No Escape

I was at work when I wrote this (uncompleted song). I was in frustration trying to escape the carnal lusts of my mind and this song just kinda popped out (thanks God).

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Verse1
Sometimes I feel no credibility
Always struggling hard with responsibility
But now I have the truth that I have found in you,
And everything inside me is born again, Im new!

Prechorus1
And now the world has got us Down
Because of our service to the crown
Despite the thousands that will die
Not regretting that they tried!!

Chorus
You are the Answer not the escape
Jesus.
Killing the Fear that Carnal flesh Makes
JESUS!!
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I have more but I have them written down at the church. I'd like to get some mp3's up soon but I don't know how long that will be.

~Kyle
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AriseNShine
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 14, 2003 7:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Kyle,

Those are great! I can tell that those are from your heart, which I'm sure pleases God.

IMHO, I think the best songs are sort of 'diaries' - true expressions of how we feel at any moment about something or someone or what we've done or whatever.

Keep it up, bro!



Joe
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 29, 2003 6:10 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Dude, I'm hearing a Linkin Park kinda sound. Pretty cool man! Good work.
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